IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

The bar chart below shows the estimated oil capacity of six countries, in millions of barrels per day, from 1990 to 2010.

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Try for free →
The provided bar chart illustrates the approximate amount of
oil
Use synonyms
 of six different nations between 1990 and 2010. The units are measured in millions of
barrels
Use synonyms
 per
day
Use synonyms
.
Overall
Linking Words
, it can be seen that Saudi Arabia has always had the biggest contribution to
oil
Use synonyms
 output compared to other nations. In general, all groups saw a gradual increase. In any case,
Qatar
Use synonyms
 had the lowest figures from 1990 to 2010. Starting with the largest producers, Saudi Arabia, the production of
oil
Use synonyms
 capacity began at just over 8
million
Use synonyms
 in 1990. Over the next two decades, the figures experienced a consistent upward trajectory, peaking at 15
million
Use synonyms
barrels
Use synonyms
 per
day
Use synonyms
 in 2010. Followed by Iran, the proportion of
oil
Use synonyms
 production started at just under 3
million
Use synonyms
barrels
Use synonyms
 per
day
Use synonyms
 in 1990 and finished at 4
million
Use synonyms
barrels
Use synonyms
 per
day
Use synonyms
at the end
Linking Words
 of the period. Meanwhile, the figures for Iraq, Kuwait, and the UAE started at exactly 2, approximately 1.8 and 2.5
million
Use synonyms
 in 1990, respectively. Over the subsequent 20 years, these numbers saw minimal growth, reaching a similar value of around 3.5
million
Use synonyms
barrels
Use synonyms
 per
day
Use synonyms
 in 2010.
Conversely
Linking Words
,
Qatar
Use synonyms
 had the lowest capacity. In 2000, there was a slight change in
Qatar
Use synonyms
's
oil
Use synonyms
 output.
However
Linking Words
,
Qatar
Use synonyms
 consistently remained at around 0.5
million
Use synonyms
 throughout the entire period.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, barrels, day, qatar, million with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: