Write a Letter to A Friend Who Just Moved Into a New House to which you are sending a gift. What Is the Gift? Why Did You Choose It? How It Will Be Delivered?

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Dear Bilor, I was absolutely thrilled to hear the wonderful news! Huge congratulations on

finally

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moving into your new

home

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. I know how much

this

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move means to you, and I am so happy to see your hard work pay off. To help celebrate

this

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exciting new chapter, I have sent a little housewarming gift your way. I chose a Le Creuset Dutch Oven for your new space. I know how much you enjoy and I thought

this

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would be the perfect addition to your kitchen to help make it feel even more like

home

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. The package is being shipped via DHL and is scheduled to arrive at your door on 7 July

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2026. Please keep an eye out for it! I can’t wait to come visit and see the new place in person once you are all settled in. Until

then

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, wishing you endless joy, comfort, and beautiful memories in your new "

home

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sweet

home

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"! Warmly, Salieu

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Jul 5, 2026

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Say why you chose the gift in a full way. One line is not enough.

task response

Add the missing words after 'you enjoy'. This part is not clear.

coherence and cohesion

Link the gift idea and the reason with one more short line.

coherence and cohesion

Each part is clear, but the second part can flow better.

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You answer all three points in the task.

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Your tone is warm and right for a letter to a friend.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear start, middle, and end.

coherence and cohesion

Greeting and closing are strong and natural.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

158 words

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