The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The maps illustrate the transformation of the area of a school over a period of 27 years.

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, it is striking that there are currently more buildings than before, so the number of students attending the school has increased. In 1985, the car park was surrounded by a square road, and it connected to the playing field with a straight path.

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, now the square road is replaced by a round one;

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, the straight path and the small car park are demolished and substituted by some trees. On the west side, there used to be a library under the office, but presently it is altered to a computer room. Once, there was only one classroom building with 2 storeys.

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it is now augmented to 3 storeys, and two recent classroom complexes have been built

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by decreasing the territory of the playing field. Below the newly built classroom on the left side, there are two modern structures for students to enjoy. They are the swimming pool and the fitness club.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

173 words

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The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

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