IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Write on this topic →
The diagram below illustrates how to recycle organic waste to produce garden
fertilizer
Change the spelling
fertiliser
show examples
.
Overall
Linking Words
,
There
Fix capitalization
there
show examples
 are five steps in
this
Linking Words
process
Use synonyms
. Starting with the plastic container and ending with a garden
fertilizer
Change the spelling
fertiliser
show examples
. The
process
Use synonyms
 involves waste decomposition with heat. The
process
Use synonyms
 starts with the plastic container having holes for air, the capacity
for
Change preposition
of
show examples
 the container is 2 cubic
metre
Fix the agreement mistake
metres
show examples
. The second step is adding material for
decompose
Replace the word
decomposition
, food is added
upto
Correct your spelling
up to
 15
cm
Punctuation problem
cm,
show examples
 followed by grass at 15cm and
then
Linking Words
 the newspaper. Next niitrogen and hot water
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
show examples
 added to the waste to create
chemical
Correct article usage
a chemical
show examples
reation
Correct your spelling
reaction
 which
produce
Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
show examples
 heat. After
that
Add a comma
that,
show examples
 the jar is sealed on the top for six months to produce compost.It is shown in the diagram that heat
emits
Wrong verb form
is emitted
show examples
 from the holes in the jar during the
process
Use synonyms
. The jar remained sealed for six months.
Linking Words
Lastly
Add a comma
Lastly,
show examples
 it is opened after the time is completed
the
Punctuation problem
, the
show examples
 garden compost is ready.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words process with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: