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The chart below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003.

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The provided pie charts illustrate the share of
energy
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 produced by 6 different sources in a certain country between 1985 and 2003. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
oil
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 has always had the biggest portion of
energy
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 production in
both
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 1985 and 2003. In general, almost all categories had higher production in 2003 than in 1985, except for
oil
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 and nuclear. The only unit which had remained constant in
both
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 years was hydro. In 1985, the
oil
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 category accounted for the highest proportion at 52%, followed by nuclear at 22%.
On the other hand
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, hydro and other renewable sources were the lowest number, with
both
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 categories having 4% for the former and 1% for the latter. Meanwhile, in 2003,
oil
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 stood out as the most significant
energy
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 resource, representing 39%. Natural gas followed at 23%. In stark contrast, other renewable and hydro had the lowest figure for
energy
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 output,
both
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 at 4%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, oil, both with synonyms.
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