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The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given line chart
illstrates
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illustrates
 the information of garbedg collected by a recycling
center
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 from 2011 to 2015. The figures are given
as
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tons
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 of
waste
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.
Overrall
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Overall
, it is apparent that paper got the highest
number
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 of
tons
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 during the whole period.
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, garden
wastes
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 had the lowest
number
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 of
tons
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 over the years. Starting with the highest
number
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, the peak accounted for the paper in 2015
by
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 the
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number
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 of 70
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ton
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tons
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 of
waste
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.
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Furthermore
, paper had the highest
number
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 in almost all of the years, it decreased from 56
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ton
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tons
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 in 2011 to 40
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ton
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 in 2013, and
the
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 it rose again in 2014 and 2015.
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 glass had the
peakest
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peak
number
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 in 2013
by
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 45
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ton
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tons
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 of
waste
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. Moving to the lowest
number
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 in the graph, which is garden wastes in 2012, it
dicline
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declined
 sharply from 32
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ton
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tons
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 in 2011 to 15
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ton
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 in 2012. The
tins
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 is
also
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 accounted as one of the lowest
tons
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 of
waste
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 in 2012 , but it increased slightly from 27
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ton
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tons
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 in 2012 to 39
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ton
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 in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tons, waste, number, ton with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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