The diagram below illustrates the process of producing soft cheese.

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The diagram below illustrates the process of producing soft cheese.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below illustrates the process of producing soft cheese.
The diagram illustrates the way in which the
process
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of producing soft
cheese
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.
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Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there are 5 stages in the
process
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of producing soft
cheese
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, beginning with the mixing
process
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and ending with the
process
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of turning into
cheese
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.
To begin
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, water and milk are mixed in a special container , and
this
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liquid is conveyed to a thick mixture. In the subsequent stage, the cooling
process
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begins. The liquid is cooled to 9 °C for 2 hours
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then
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salt is added. Preparing liquid is conveyed liquid to a thick mixture.
Following
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this
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, in the fermentation
process
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liquid is boiled at 37 °C for 6 hours with the help of heat.
Next,
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the liquid is boiled again at 100 °C for 8 hours in the evaporation
process
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with the help of heat. A filter is applied to each
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Finally
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, in the next
stage
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it is cooled, and
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excess water is discharged as waste.
As a result
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, soft
cheese
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is ready to
distribute
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be distributed
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to customers and stores.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, cheese with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pasteurization
  • harmful bacteria
  • heated
  • specific temperature
  • optimal
  • enzyme
  • bacterial activity
  • starter cultures
  • rennet
  • fermentation process
  • lactose
  • lactic acid
  • curdle
  • curds and whey
  • cheesecloths
  • drained
  • settling
  • pressed
  • firmer texture
  • salting
  • preservative
  • packaged
  • distribution
  • aged
  • consumed fresh
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