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The chart below shows the amount of aid ($ billions) that six developed countries gave to developing countries from 2008 to 2010.

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The bar chart compares how much
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 six developed countries, namely the
USA
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,
Germany
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, the
UK
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,
Japan
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, the
Netherlands
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 , and
Sweden
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, gave to developing countries between 2008 and 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the highest index shown was the
USA
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 in 2001, the lowest
figure
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 shown was
Sweden
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 in 2008 and 2009. As the bar chart shows, in 2008 the highest
figure
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 shown was the
USA
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 at $ 2
billions
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, but the lowest index shown was the
Netherlands
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 at $4
billions
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. The
aid
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 given by the
UK
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 and
Japan
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 were similar at $9
billions
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. Coming to
Germany
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 more higher at $6
billions
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 rather than the
Netherlands
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 at $4
billions
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. Regarding the highest
figure
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 indicated was the
USA
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 at $18
billions
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, but the lowest indexes were shown in
Sweden
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 and the
Netherlands
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 at $4
billions
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 in 2009.
Japan
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 was lower at $7
billions
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 rather than
Germany
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 at $6
billions
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 in 2009. The
UK
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 gave
aid
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 to $5
billions
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 for developing countries in 2009. In 2010, the highest
figure
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 indicated was in the
USA
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 at $24
billions
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, but the lowest index shown was in
Sweden
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 at just under $5
billions
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.
Germany
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 is higher at $9
billions
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 rather than
Japan
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 at $8
billions
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. The
UK
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 and the
Netherlands
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 gave the amount of
aid
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 at $7 and $5
billions
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, approximately.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words aid, usa, germany, uk, japan, netherlands, sweden, figure, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicated" was used 2 times.
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