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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
The above figure shows components of Gross Domestic Product in the UK from 1992 to 2000. In the
year
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 1992, the
growth
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 of
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industry
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 was 6%
and
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 the
growth
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 of
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service
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industry
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 was 4%. The
growth
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 of
IT
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the IT
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industry
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 was 8%
while
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 the
growth
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 of
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service
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the service
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industry
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 was 6.5% in the
year
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 1994. There is steep increment in the IT
industry
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 was 7.5%
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while
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 the
growth
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 of
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service
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the service
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industry
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 was 7% in the
year
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 1996.
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, the augmentation of
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service
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the service
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 sector was 12%
while
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 the augmentation of
IT
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the IT
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industry
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 was 7.5% in the
year
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 1998. The amount of
growth
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 in
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service
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the service
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industry
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 was 14.5%
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 in the
growth
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 in IT
industry
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 was 8 in the
year
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 2000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, growth, industry, service with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 7 times.
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