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the table below shows the results of survey in 2000 2005 and 2010 about one university

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the table below shows the results of survey in 2000 2005 and 2010 about one university
The given table presents the data on
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the evaluation
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 of aspects at the university in 2000, 2005 and 2010. The data is measured in percentages.
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, the print resources shared the highest percentage,
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 the proportion of
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the range
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 of offered modules was considerably lower. Electronic resources
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 highest among other categories in rating in 2000, 2005 and 2010, standing at 84%, 89% and 88%, respectively. The following highest rate referred to buildings and teaching facilities, making up 77% in three different years. Meanwhile, the teaching quality shared similar proportions in these years, accounting for 65%, 63% and 69%. Regarding the range of modules, it showed the lowest percentage among other categories, standing at 32%, 30% and 27% in 2000, 2005 and 2010.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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