Here is the complete essay, structured for a high band score. It combines your excellent introduction with the academic vocabulary and logical transitions we discussed.
In this contemporary time tourism is an important for a nation's reputation. Some people think that people from other countries should follow the culture and customs when they enter a new community. While others opine t
When the tourist travels to a new country with a different culture and way of dressing, he will have to choose either to play by the rules or to stay true to his beliefs, and maybe he would prefer to show his style and c
Whenever tourists enter a country, they should choose between following local customs or maintain their own culture abroad. While I prefer to adapt, this essay will discuss both of the arguments.
Tourists from foreign countries either ought to follow their customs, or welcoming the traditions of abroad by the host nation. This essay discusses the reason why foreigners should follow local traditions and the benef
Nowadays, people travel much more than before, thanks to how technology and marketing have advanced, we can see a lot of advertising promoting tourism in all parts of the world. In this essay we will be able to debate or