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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

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Some people believe that sharing
details
 of
research
 conducted in scientific, academic and business domain is beneficial;
however
, some people have a different opinion
that
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 sharing the specifics could disclose critical
information
. While sharing important
information
 could open doors to plagiarism, it can
also
 provide a comprehensive understanding to the
readers
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normous impact on their learning. Sharing sensitive and critical
information
 like
references
, statistical analysis freely can lead to several implications in the
research
. The most common consequence is plagiarism. With the
details
 freely accessible, the fellow researchers can avail the opportunity of copying the content from the
research
 and branding it as their own
research
.
This
 is most common in the
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PhD
 courses where students copy the
references
 from the
research
 work of fellow students.
However
,
this
 essay disagrees with
this
 viewpoint because not sharing all the
information
 could leave
readers
 confused. Sharing
details
 provide
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omplete understanding to the
readers
.
In addition
, it strengthens the theses and provides
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olid foundation to the
research
 work. Providing important
information
 like
references
 and statistical analysis can help the reader to understand the conclusion of the result in a better manner.
For example
,
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research
 on global warming is incomplete without a statistical analysis of past and current carbon emissions data, supported by strong
references
.
This
 essay agrees with
this
 viewpoint because
research
 is incomplete without all the
details
. To conclude, people believe that important
research
information
 should not be made freely available due to plagiarism,
on the other hand
, some believe that important
information
 should be freely available to the
readers
 to make them understand the full context. In my opinion, important
information
 should be shared for better understanding for the
readers
.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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