Education is very important. How can children who are disinterested in study be motivated to learn?

Living in the competitive world, better
education
always comes with
higher living standard
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a higher living standard
higher living standards
. How to improve the
education
in
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of
children, especially the one who does not like studying, is a problem for
education industry
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the education industry
in every country. When the child is too young to understand the importance of studying, it is really hard to have the motivation. At the early stage, in
junior primary school
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the junior primary school
for example
, a little discipline is necessary. Though
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
like reading and counting maybe not as interesting as watching cartoons, spending some time on these boring subjects should be compulsory. These measures will give them the ability to enjoy learning activities in coming future, when they will be more confident to explore the unknown area.
However
, to increase the confidence in studying, the most important is
encouragement
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encouraging
, especially in senior primary school and secondary school, when the children need to expand their knowledge dramatically. Most of the
student
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students
are disinterested in learning because of lack of
confident
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confidence
confidentiality
. If an encourage
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
is provided, they will have fun in studying and enjoy the feeling of achievement,
hence
will be motivated to learn more. In consequence, a better
education
level can be expected.
Moreover
,
academy
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the academy
does not
necessary
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necessarily
have to be boring, it can be fun. For young children, knowledge can be
tought
impart skills or knowledge to
taught
thought
in cartoons. The Blue Cat series is a successful sample in China, which is
a
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an
educational program enjoyed by many children in China. In order to get
better result
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better results
a better result
in children, knowledge can be delivered via
children’s favourite cartoon characters
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the children’s favourite cartoon characters
. For the teenager, the idols in the entertainment industry play a big role [
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could have been combined with the following sentence with ‘and as
such
’[/expand]. They should be encouraged to send the correct messages to their fans. In conclusion, compulsory
education
is necessary at an early stage of studying, while
encourage
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encouraging
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
and teaching in more entertaining ways are extremely important.

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