some believe that government should provide free health care.However some think that government may not able to provide health care and people should pat for it. what do you think?

Authorities find it challenging to subsidies the
health
care
system, due to the increase of financial requirement, which in turn, drives some people to suggest that the patients should provide themselves,
on the other hand
, others insist that
health
care
should be governmental responsibility.
Health
care
is fundamental for any community, and it is considered the
bed rock
solid unweathered rock lying beneath surface deposits of soil
bedrock
of the society security and future,
hence
the government should create
strong medical infrastructure
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a strong medical infrastructure
that is
able to confront the citizens emergences and medical needs
.
Accept space
.
Furthermore
, the
health
care
should include free medicine and vaccines.
Besides
high qualified staff to guarantee appropriate medical
care
and possessional service. In terms of providing medical sector,
government
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the government
needs unprecedented measures to tackle
this
problem.
For example
, reorganization of the country budget to be spent on
health
system rather than weapons and war preparations.
Evenmore
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Even more
, it should encourage private investment in medial
care
. The other approach, which claims individuals to provide the
health
insurance on their own, represents the injustice for many reasons
.
Accept space
.
Firstly
, citizens pay taxes for their regimes,
thus
they expect convenient
services especially
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services, especially
when it comes to
basics
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the basics
of life
such
as education and
health
.
Secondly
,
this
notion generates inequality of opportunity because people don't possess the same financial abilities to afford
health
care
.
Finally
,
this
concept brings hazardous ramifications to the society and produces disastrous implications
,
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,
such
as the absence of affiliation owing to that people will feel that their
county
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
is not
care
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caring
about them. In conclusion,
health
care
system is crucial for any society
seek
Suggestion
seeks
to ameliorate its present and secure its future.
In addition
, if there is not efficient and free
health
, people will suffer from illness and endure compromised
health
.
Consequently
, the community will lose his best element which is the human competence.

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