Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?

Stress is considered by many as one of the most actual issues for people around the globe. It is agreed that
this
problem continues to raise, and should be treated as relevant.
This
essay
will
Accept comma addition
will, firstly
firstly
, consider some causes of
this
problematic
Suggestion
problem
, and
secondly
, describing possible solutions. Modern society is prone to be stressed about different situations, and some argue that it is mainly because of the accelerate lifestyle
that is
known in today´s world.
In other words
, the younger generations have been born in a community, in which they must know every single detail of their life, and
also
take care of that. An example to
this
can be found in the
globalitation
growth to a global or worldwide scale
globalization
and improvement of their social media, as
this
plural of "this"
these
tools gave the society the possibility of get to
recieve
get something; come into possession of
receive
information about not only personal, but
also
global and
gubernamental
relating to or dealing with the affairs or structure of government or politics or the state
governmental
problems.
Therefore
, what can be
made
having finished or arrived at completion
done
to solve
this
issue? It is stated that stress can be attacked by focusing on the important things and not over-working to get the best results possible.
This
means that people should not work more than it is recommended in a
desesperate
arising from or marked by despair or loss of hope
desperate
attempt to get more money.
For instance
, the German law regulated in the early 2000´s the number of
permited
consent to, give permission
permitted
working hours per week for employees in the whole country,
adressing
the place where a person or organization can be found or communicated with
addressing
a maximum of 40 weekly hours. In conclusion, in a world
that is
constantly changing, and that asks more and more from their inhabitants to be as productive as possible, it is important to affront
this
problem not only from an individual point of view, but
also
having a participation from the governments for their whole citizens.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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