In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘’anyone can do it’’ in the arts – music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?

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Life has changed dramatically and so have human. Today, gifted people are recognized by their own

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as singing, writing, drawing, etc.

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others are successful without having any special talent. In my opinion, I disagree that those with innate talent are not considered as valuable as before.

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, I think people nowadays can be easily successful in the entertainment industry compared to those in the past. Technology is one of the most contributions to

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development. Amateurs can record their singing voices and upload them on social media. The process does not require too many complex or professional tasks.

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, the one who prefers to create their videos does not have to pay a large amount of money for the studio to do

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, in order to have these music videos spread widely among the audience, recorders must follow the famous trend

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ubiquitous at the moment. Compared to what happened in the past, we must say only talented people had their chance to become well-known. And the more exceptional they were, the more people admired them because they could do things that ordinary people could not.

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there are more and more headliners without being trained methodically, the gifted are still valued and appreciated. I think the statement ‘anyone can do anything’ is more likely to emphasize the worth of effort. Whether people were born with or without innate talent, they have to practice what they would like to master every day. Thomas Edison used to quote ‘Genius is 1

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of inspiration and 99

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of perspiration’. With special ability, it is good. But if not, try to practice every day and be the best version of yourself. In my view, the value of a person is defined by their morals and attitudes

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of how famous they are.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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