Older-school children should learn a wide range of subjects and develop knowledge, or they should only learn a small number of subjects in detail. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Education counts in
future
competition on the international arena, so schools around the world are intent on figuring out the most efficient way of improving students’ academic performance. Some people insist that students ought to focus on
one
subject
while others believe that additional subjects are of necessity.
This
essay will examine both arguments. The reason why students should only learn
one
subject
is that more efforts lead to maximized learning efficiency. Naturally, students can spend most of time and energy in probing into their majors and refer to more learning materials in relevant domains,
thus
spurring creative power. What is more, social activities should constitute the essential part of students’ education, so
focusing
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focused
on
one
particular field is a better choice to strike a balance between study and social practice. Of course,
this
practice is potentially harmful to students.
Firstly
, students’ horizon fails to be expanded if they only contact
one
subject
, which would impede their
further
academic development in the
future
. Worse, limitation in
one
subject
might deprive students of the chance to find what really interests them, leading to the consequence of lacking enthusiasm
to make
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doing
making
further
research in their majors.
For example
, many graduates show indifference to their study, believing that their four-year college life is a waste of time.
On the other hand
, if the syllabus including a variety of courses, the disadvantages are inevitable. For
one
thing, it is difficult for students occupied by course study to allocate extra time to other necessary activities,
such
as
club
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a club
clubs
, or outside-campus internship. For another, too much burden would be created because students have to preview and review so many subjects to pass examinations. The benefits obtained,
nevertheless
, are more worthwhile.
To begin
with,
knowledge
in different disciplines helps students lay a solid foundation for
future
job-capacity since practical problem-solving ability has to be cultivated based on diverse
knowledge
.
For example
, relevant computer problems depend on language and mathematics expertise.
Furthermore
, in acquiring
knowledge
, students can know truly what they would devote the rest of their life
to in their
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in their future
future
academic life. In summary,
although
one
particular
subject
teaching methodology has some benefits, a wide range of courses
are
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is
vital to students ’
further
development. As for me, students should expand their horizon, and absorb more
knowledge
.
Submitted by nmtpul on

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