Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that traditional
literature
has greater influences on children’ development than foreign
literature
. From my perspective, I completely disagree with
this
point of view. On the one hand, there is little doubt that locally written works have various benefits for pupils. Through learning
literature
of their mother tongue, students have chances to enrich
skills
Suggestion
the skills
of using their own language,
such
as the flexibility of the vocabulary used or the different ways to convey ideas.
As a result
,
this
would be advantageous for children not only in their study but
also
in social communication in their future.
In addition
, traditional
literature
can help students gain deeper insights into their own cultures.
This
reason is that some works of arts, namely fairy tales or legends could familiarize them with the national traditions and values.
This
,
consequently
, will develop a sense of identity and patriotism
for
Suggestion
in
children.
On the other hand
, I suppose that learning foreign
literature
is
also
beneficial for young people in several ways.
Firstly
, pupils will have opportunities to broaden their horizons by showing them a bigger picture of the world. It is undeniable that having access to foreign historical events and cultures would foster children’s awareness of the world’s diversity.
Secondly
, youngsters could be more prepared for the globalized world since they have acquired a wide range of knowledge about how to adapt themselves in terms of manners, customs and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
when they live in a foreign environment or deal with foreigners. In conclusion,
although
I agree that traditional
literature
plays a vital role in the development of children, I would believe that the contribution of other countries’
literature
is equally important and should not be overlooked.

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