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Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people argue that traditional
literature
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 has greater influences on children’ development than foreign
literature
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. From my perspective, I completely disagree with
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 point of view. On the one hand, there is little doubt that locally written works have various benefits for pupils. Through learning
literature
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 of their mother tongue, students have chances to enrich
skills
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the skills
 of using their own language,
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 as the flexibility of the vocabulary used or the different ways to convey ideas.
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,
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 would be advantageous for children not only in their study but
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 in social communication in their future.
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, traditional
literature
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 can help students gain deeper insights into their own cultures.
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 reason is that some works of arts, namely fairy tales or legends could familiarize them with the national traditions and values.
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,
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, will develop a sense of identity and patriotism
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 children.
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, I suppose that learning foreign
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 beneficial for young people in several ways.
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, pupils will have opportunities to broaden their horizons by showing them a bigger picture of the world. It is undeniable that having access to foreign historical events and cultures would foster children’s awareness of the world’s diversity.
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, youngsters could be more prepared for the globalized world since they have acquired a wide range of knowledge about how to adapt themselves in terms of manners, customs and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
 when they live in a foreign environment or deal with foreigners. In conclusion,
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 I agree that traditional
literature
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 plays a vital role in the development of children, I would believe that the contribution of other countries’
literature
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 is equally important and should not be overlooked.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Native literature
  • Cultural identity
  • Heritage
  • Traditions
  • National pride
  • Language skills
  • Idiomatic expressions
  • Engagement
  • Relatability
  • Broaden perspectives
  • Cultural awareness
  • Open-mindedness
  • Literary heritage
  • Bias
  • Diverse perspectives
  • Global community
  • Domestic vs. international literature
  • Cultural nuances
  • Sense of belonging
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