With the increasing population, communication via the Internet and text messaging, face-to-face communication will become a thing of the past. Agree or disagree?

For years, the society has triggered far-reaching changes in many aspects of our daily lives ranging from business, healthcare, education to
communication
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communicate
. The prevalence of the Internet-based and technological
communication
is said to make face-to-face one archaic. From my perspective, I vigorously take issue with
this
statement as following reasons.
To begin
with, virtual
communication
is of paramount importance in several relationships.
For example
, in love, oral conversation is
indispensable
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indispensable, although
although
lovers can
contact
with each other by social media
such
as Facebook messenger,
skype
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Skype
, line. They need body
contact
as a hug or a kiss, which is impossibly done in letters or emails and being apart for a long time is utterly not beneficial to a relationship.
Moreover
, it is common for heavy social network users to feel awkward when trying to strike up conversations with strangers or make small talk about social events.
Thus
, these people might eventually become socially alienated and suffer from a great sense of solitude.
Furthermore
, two crucial aspects, one protecting confidentiality, the
other enhancing
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other, enhancing
trust and credibility, make real-life
contact
the most preferable way of
communication
.
Although
it is undisputed that the unrestricted access to the Internet has greatly benefited the public for its convenience and comfort, data sent via the telecommunication tools including
emails
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email
, instant messaging, social networks might be prone to be attacked by hackers. Internet insecurity is
sustainably
a downside of advanced
communication
while virtual
contact
is prioritized as its privacy. Especially, in business, people prefer real-life conversation because telecommunication is supposed to be inappropriate for negotiation. To sum up, despite the communicating development, virtual conversation
sustainably
capable of being sustained
sustainable
plays a pivotal role in our life and cannot be thoroughly supplanted somehow.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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