Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

My 6 years old cousin started his very
first
class at 1st grade which does not same with almost children in recent time
.
Accept space
.
Throughout his
first
6 years, his parent didn’t take him to kindergarten as many others kids because they strongly believed that they could become their son’s best teacher. Until, they recognised that the kid couldn’t quickly adapt to
new school’s environment
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the new school’s environment
. In fact, there is a widespread belief that parents are children’s best teachers.
Although
the statement is a controversial one, I completely disagree with
this
opinion for
two following reasons
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the two following reasons
.
Firstly
, it’s easy to see that parents are not perfect enough to complete the imperfection of their children. There can be no doubt that people and things in the outside world can well contribute to the
development
of the youth. The
first
reason for
this
point of view is that there are several skills which children cannot learn from their own parents
such
as communication, teamwork and…. Essentially, children might get
such
skills whenever they have
chance
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a chance
the chance
to contact with several factors in
society
. Particularly, a child who was
early
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earlier
taken to the community and had a chance to communicate with others is always more confident than the others who didn’t
.
Accept space
.
In other words
, in
this
case,
society
and other stuffs in it have become a sufficient teacher
to
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for
of
children.
Secondly
, owing to the
development
of
economy
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the economy
, parents are hectic with making a living.
Hence
, they are definitely not able to stick to their sons or daughters 24/7. It seems that fathers and mothers have only 10 hours per day to instruct what their kids should do or not.
Therefore
, most of the time, the adolescent associates with
community
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the community
communities
and is affected by
this
part of
society
.
Accept space
.
As a result
,
society
coincidentally becomes a part which effect on children’s improvement.
Although
, there are many supporting opinions for the statement “parents are the best instructors to kids” because they can well- understand their kids from daily habit to thinking.
However
, if we carefully considered every single feature which need for the
development
of a child, we would see that
society
and its parts play vital roles
for
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in
the
development
of
teen-agers
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenagers
. In short, despite the common thoughts of most parents, we need to weigh up the pros and cons of
this
teaching method in order to find out
the most proficiency
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the most proficient
way to instruct and develop children.

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