Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about how new houses should be built. While some argue that new homes in the locality should follow the traditional styles, I would believe that people should be free to design their houses in the way they prefer. On the one hand, there are several reasons why people suppose that houses should be built in the traditional architecture.
Firstly
,
this
trend would help preserve traditional and cultural values that might boost the local tourism.
For example
, Hoi
An
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A
, which is one of the most ancient cities in Vietnam, has become a tourist destination that attracts millions of visitors on an annual basis.
Secondly
, new houses that follow the style of others in the local area could make residents have a sense of equality. By asking people to build their homes that match other houses, government can stop the display of wealth.
On the other hand
, I would maintain that people have rights to decide how to build their houses. The reason is that a
house
is the reflection of the owner’s personality.
Therefore
, every
house
owner should be allowed to decide whatever design they like. Another factor
needs taking
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needs, taking
into account is the cost. There is no doubt that it is much cheaper to build a
house
in the modern style than the ones mirror past architectural standards. In conclusion,
although
building houses in the traditional architecture have many benefits, I personally believe it is better that people are allowed to build their
house
with their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
design.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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