Write a letter to the holiday company complaining about the holiday and asking for some sort of refund?

I have just returned from a holiday organized by your travel company.
However
, against all my expectations, I was fairly dissatisfied with these services.
Therefore
, I am writing to complain about the number of points.
First
of all, you said that I could be able to select anything from a wide range of thrilling activities every day, but I only was chosen two activities each day.
Also
, while picking out wind-suffering and sailing, I was not allowed to play them.
Moreover
, I had no opportunities to participate in the camping expedition because the weather was bad for almost three days.
Second
, the residential
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, which you highly recommended for me to gradually
relaxed
Suggestion
relax
, has numerous things
such
as a swimming pool, sauna, etc.
Conversely
, you put me in a youth hostel, where have no buses or cars so I was totally unpleasant
this
.
Besides
, the accommodation in the hostel was terrible without comfortable double rooms or the kitchen;
hence
, you could not show your talent to cook excellent meals for me. All of that, the cost of
this
holiday was too expensive for 13 days. I request that you refund the money in half of the total that I paid for you. I hope you will look into the matter and give me the best solution. If you could discuss
this
matter, you can contact me on 0123879456. I am looking forward to hearing from your company with a solution as much as possible.

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