The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams below explain a wave-
energy
Use synonyms
machine
’s design and the Use synonyms
locations
options and their costs.
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location
Overall
, a wave-Linking Words
energy
Use synonyms
machine
generates Use synonyms
energy
from sea waves. It utilizes water and air to generate electricity. Use synonyms
In addition
, its location is one of the important factors that affect the result.
A wave-Linking Words
energy
Use synonyms
machine
consists of two chambers, two turbines, and Use synonyms
electricity
generator. The first chamber allows water to come inside the machines, the Correct article usage
an electricity
second
one Linking Words
used
Add a missing verb
is used
release
air flow outside the Add the particle
to release
machine
. The Use synonyms
machine
utilizes the turbines to split air from water and create Use synonyms
energy
.
Despite the Use synonyms
machine
’s mechanism, it is very important to place the Use synonyms
machine
in a suitable place to get the required output. The machines that Use synonyms
installed
in Add a missing verb
are installed
a
large waves place Correct article usage
apply
create
high Add the particle
to create
energy
. Use synonyms
However
, they have high expenses. On the other side, Linking Words
energy
generators Use synonyms
which
located in a small Correct pronoun usage
apply
waves
position provide low output. Change the noun form
wave
Nevertheless
, their costs are low.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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