People are living in a ‘throwaway society’, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

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there

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There

is a widely held view that people tend to buy new things frequently

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However

, it will be thrown away if it

have

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has

no valuable using after

expeding

extend in one or more directions

expanding

exploding

for a short time

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Clearly, a number of reasons have been put forward for

this

tendency

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This

essay

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therefore

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will outline some potential causes as well as

evualating

evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of

evaluating

evaluation

evolution

ít effects

To begin

with

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there are many plausible factors leading to

this

situation.

Firstly

, some enterprises

promote

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promotes

their projects with more various

function

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functions

than the previous one

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urging

peole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

to buy manufacturers 'products

such

smartphone

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smartphones

a smartphone

Secondly

, the busy lifestyle of

citzen

a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community

citizens

also

the fundamental reason causing to a throwaway society

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This

could be because of that workers have to prepare their work at home, and cleaning their house

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so they do not have adequate time to repair the spoiled things.

Additionally

, the impact of

this

emergent

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emerging

trend should not be overlooked

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If the habit of discharging the spoiled thing continually happened

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environmental region would be more exacerbating more than it used to be,

hence

it could have many devastating effects on their environment where they are

inhabbiting

inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of

inhabiting

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Moreover

, not only do the habit of throwing own things away impact on the natural world

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but it

also influence

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also influences

has also influenced

on adolescent's sense when they see their parent usually do that. Owing to the lack of parents' education

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youngster cannot discriminate between the good routine and the bad one.

As a result

, parents' strict principle

steer

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steers

children away from a throwaway society

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recapitualte

summarize briefly

recapitulate

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the advertisement of modern goods and the busy lifestyle of each

people

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person

are the two main

reason

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reasons

contribute to the throwaway society

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Besides

this

trend

also

brings several negative influences

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posing a threat.

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consumerism
fast-paced production
advertising
disposable goods
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values shift
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environmental pollution
landfill overflow
natural resource depletion
carbon emissions
social inequality
labor exploitation
economic inefficiency
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People are living in a ‘throwaway society’, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reason for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Environmental problems are too big for individuals countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. What is your opinion?

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