People are living in a ‘throwaway society’, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

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is a widely held view that people tend to buy new things frequently

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, it will be thrown away if it

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has

no valuable using after

expeding

extend in one or more directions

expanding

exploding

for a short time

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tendency

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essay

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will outline some potential causes as well as

evualating

evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of

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there are many plausible factors leading to

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situation.

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, some enterprises

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promotes

their projects with more various

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functions

than the previous one

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urging

peole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

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to buy manufacturers 'products

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smartphone

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smartphones

a smartphone

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, the busy lifestyle of

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a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community

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the fundamental reason causing to a throwaway society

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could be because of that workers have to prepare their work at home, and cleaning their house

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so they do not have adequate time to repair the spoiled things.

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, the impact of

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emergent

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emerging

trend should not be overlooked

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If the habit of discharging the spoiled thing continually happened

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environmental region would be more exacerbating more than it used to be,

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it could have many devastating effects on their environment where they are

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inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of

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, not only do the habit of throwing own things away impact on the natural world

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but it

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also influences

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on adolescent's sense when they see their parent usually do that. Owing to the lack of parents' education

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youngster cannot discriminate between the good routine and the bad one.

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, parents' strict principle

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steers

children away from a throwaway society

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recapitualte

summarize briefly

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the advertisement of modern goods and the busy lifestyle of each

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person

are the two main

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contribute to the throwaway society

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brings several negative influences

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posing a threat.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

299 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumerism
fast-paced production
advertising
disposable goods
degradation
values shift
repair and reuse
environmental pollution
landfill overflow
natural resource depletion
carbon emissions
social inequality
labor exploitation
economic inefficiency
sustainable products

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People are living in a ‘throwaway society’, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Electronic devices play a significant role in improving healthcare and education by providing access to valuable information, facilitating communication, and enhancing learning experiences. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion.