In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views as to whether tax should be devoted to fast trains connecting cities or
transport
public in use.
Although
it can be argued that investing in high speed trains between cities is essential, I believe that ameliorating current existing public
transport
is more urgent. On the one hand, I agree that new railway lines for fast trains between cities bring a number of benefits. When high-speed trains allow commuters to travel a great distance in a short period, city dwellers have
tendency
Suggestion
a tendency
the tendency
to move out of city centres to live in the vicinity where houses are more affordable and the environment is fresher.
As a result
, dilemmas of major cities including housing, traffic jams and pollution can be addressed comparatively effectively.
In addition
, tourism in neighbouring cities may benefit from these railway lines because when travelling between cities becomes more convenient, people are likely to spend their weekend travelling and exploring these places
instead
of staying at home.
On the other hand
, I am of the opinion that public
transport
should be upgraded before pouring money into high speed trains.
Firstly
, roads need
maintaining
Suggestion
to maintain
and enlarging to meet the transportation needs, leading to
reducing
Suggestion
reduced
traffic jams and accidents.
For example
, after the routes between two cities Vinh and Ha Tinh in Vietnam had been repaired, the number of accidents reduced significantly and trade between cities developed more than before.
Secondly
, existing public transportation
such
as buses, regular trains should be enhanced
instead
of constructing new railways. The reason is that
such
forms of
transport
may meet sufficient
transport
needs of the majority of citizens if they are good enough. In conclusion, it seems to me that spending tax improving present-day public transportation is more beneficial than building railways for high speed trains.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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