Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.

In the wake of modernisation and higher living standards, many have been seeking to have more than just 1 career in order to earn their living.
Consequently
, there
has existed
Suggestion
exists
a trend towards having several careers, which results in the fact that
further
education
will be long-lasting throughout
one
's life. In my point of view, the notion mentioned above is something that really works. People's choices to take up 2 or more jobs at the same time appear to be actually
wise
(comparative of 'bad') inferior to another in quality or condition or desirability
worse
when taking these following things into consideration.
Firstly
,
this
can give them an
additionto
Suggestion
addition to
their income. As
having been mentioned
Suggestion
mentioned
was mentioned
, higher income is somewhat almost all of us desire since the quality of having more money helps cover the growing expense.
Secondly
, a vast majority of people now want to gain experience that cannot be gained from their current job, so they apply for the
second
(or
third
, even fourth)
one
. Some want to meet new people and make new friends or aspire to take up a job that fits their interest. In
one
way or another, a multi-career person benefits a lot and their options unquestionably make sense. Together with the multi-career fad, there is
also
a trend towards
ever-lasting
continuing forever or indefinitely
everlasting
education
which means the practice of people receiving a
further
education
even when they have graduated or have nothing to do with
shooling
the exchange of goods for an agreed sum of money
selling
schooling
sailing
. Again, I want to emphasize that
this
is a beneficial trend and people have dozens of rationales for it. It is undeniable that what we do not know outnumbers what we already know. As soon as people are aware of
this
, they have an increasing inclination to
further
education
.
Besides
, the world never stops changing and there is certainly up-to-date knowledge
one
must know in order to keep up with the mainstream. Of course, multi-career and
everlastiing
continuing forever or indefinitely
everlasting
education
have their own difficulties and adversities.
However
, on a general scale, their
bnefits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
benefit
and wonders
inarguably
outweigh all of their
backdraws
.
Submitted by Thanh on

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