Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people attribute that increasing the minimum valid

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for commuting by cars or motorbikes would be the best way to keep the road

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safer. Personally, I entirely disagree that it is the most ideal. The

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has right to access

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with machined vehicles should be limited for several reasons. The

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one is that young people did not

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concern about their physical well-being. In fact,

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they met the

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age standard,

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standard age,

lack of physical strength could drive them to be out of their control

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their own vehicles.

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might block the

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or even cause unexpected casualties. Premature perception is another reason. The young virtually have

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a shortage

of skills and experiences.

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to thousands of

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flows requires them to possess the flexibility and sharp reaction.

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, they are not skilful enough to manage to and

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contributes to higher accident risk.

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would argue that there are effective ways to reduce the

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accident.

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, heavy punishments have significant impacts on encouraging people to drive more safety. From that, people will avoid repeating the same offence unless they want to be fired a decent amount of money.

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, the authority should release more strict regulations on granting driving licence.

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could be done by bringing out more difficult driving test aiming to issue qualified certification. These expressed might be more feasible to alleviate casualty. In conclusion,

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raising the lowest legal

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is an acceptable choice, there are more efficient measures proposed to make road

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safer.