More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages

In modern society, there has been a major concern that many couples have delayed parenthood. Some explanations for
this
social trend is considered that
career
, changes in social belief, women empowerment, escalating living expenses, increased
life
expectancy are the most prominent reason why a large number of pairs decide to have babies in their later
age
. In my belief advantages of having children later in
life
outweigh its demerits. (*
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Fist, It is transparent that in
this
age
of huge competition, unemployment and economic crisis, people around the world are constantly worried about their
career
, job promotions and their position in their job
thus
a variety of parents are very passionate and enthusiastic about their
career
development and their profession is the primary so they just focus on their
career
and mostly don't care about having a
baby
even get married. (*)
Furthermore
, still having some undoubted reason they do not expect to have children in the early stage of their marriage because it is believed that children are raised better by older parents.
This
seems valid due to the fact that older fathers and mothers are generally wealthier, more experienced, and more willing to take the responsibility of bringing up a child. (*
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Other than women empowerment is
also
a justification why parents decide and determine to postpone their
first
childbirth. In the current day, the woman not only do the homework or take care of the
children but
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children, but
also
work to earn
money
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money, hence
hence
so many wives decide to
born
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bear
in their later
age
after they reach a stable job position. (*
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Ultimately, parents might put their
career
at a risk as well as the future of their children if they become parents before they are mentally and economically stable. (*
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This
phenomenon in present-day really makes some people right consider that should they have the children later in their expectancy. But in some cases, having a
baby
is absolutely awesome. Let think that their
life
will become happier if they have a
baby
and what will come unless they have the
baby
. Of course, their
life
will be monotonous or stress.
For example
, almost parent
always feel
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always feels
happy and
unstress
not bearing a stress or accent
unstressed
when they arrive at the home after a tired day. (*
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Moreover
, when an aged couple decides to give birth, there are serious health risks for the woman in the prenatal and postnatal period. If any complicated maternal health problem arises, the
life
whole family would be turned upside down. (*
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To
sum up, there are so many reasons why people should decide to have the children at a later
age
and not. In my opinion, having children at a later
age
will be amazing chose
of
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for
me and I think more and more the
parentless
children will be nurtured if some people can not have a child.

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