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Some people say education is the only critical factor to the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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On the one hand good
education
 is a highly recommended skill in the developed countries,
on the other hand
 the highest wish of many people in regions of poverty. But what makes
education
 to the key factor for the development of a
country
? We must acknowledge that
education
 is something that we all need. The differences are just what we learn. Mostly the limited educational horizons of poor and less educated people have more to deal with their personal situation than with problems of
bigger effects
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the bigger effects
 on a
country
. Attending school is sometimes too expensive and it does not feed a family.
Nevertheless there
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Nevertheless, there
 must be a reason for
education
.
For
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 me it looks like some countries have realized that
Education
 is the key
for
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to
in
 the globalization process. If we take
India
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India, for
for
example we
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example, we
 can see that a change in the educational system had changed the economy of the
country
. The
country
 has changed from a poor region to a high potential aria for IT knowledge. In regard to
this
fact it
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fact, it
 is a must that the Governments of less developed countries take the power of
education
 seriously and offer it to a wide range of people. Spending money for
education
 is the key
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effects
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effect
 on the economy and social life. All in all I agree with the importance of
education
 for the development of a
country
. Less knowledge leads to poverty and not to knowledge that has wide effects. Learning and Knowledge is Power and an investment in the near future and
therefore
 it has to be an official task.
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