Some people think it is necessary to test medicine intended for humans, on animals first. However, others feel that this should not be the way. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the past few decades, due to
technology there
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technology, there
has been a massive advancement in the field of
medicine
. According to some people medicines, which are meant for human being must be
first
experimented on animals.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
group of people
are
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is
against
this
option.
This
essay will talk
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
both the views and chooses the best option. To embark upon, though there
are
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is
advance technology for making and
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
medicines, it can be experimented before
implemented
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implementing
humans.
This
can be dangerous sometime and it can risk someone’s
life
. So
that is
why Scientists experiment it on animals before launching them into market for usage. Since an individual person’s
life
is very precious it harmful to
experimented
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experiment
on humans and there is a law regulation on not to experiment
medicine
on humans.
For example
, In India around 1979 one of the scientist experimented Polio
medicine
on
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for
12 people. Unfortunately, all of them died due to some miscalculation of the usage. It was a big failure. From
then
onward Government of India imposed a law medicines which will be used by humans after it experiment
first
on animals.
However
, many social activists and animal lovers are against these experiments. They feel, that the use of different ingredients and various
acids which
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acids, which
are very harmful and it might cause side-effects to the
life
span of animals. There are possibilities of spreading these side effects on other animals. For instants, in the state of Bihar in India,
Monkeies
any of various long-tailed primates (excluding the prosimians)
monkeys
were experimented for a particular diabetic
medicines
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medicine
. It was successful and
this
medicine
are
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is
prelevant
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
in the market.
but
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But
the side effects of
this
medicines
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medicine
on experimented Monkey
was
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were
terrible and many were
died
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dying
. To sum up, though I it is important to implement
medicine
first
on animals to save
human’s
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a human’s life
life
. But, at the same time Scientists must play a responsible role, in keeping in mind about the tested
medicine
before implementing.

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