Some people think it is necessary to test medicine intended for humans, on animals first. However, others feel that this should not be the way. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the past few decades, due to

technology there

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technology, there

has been a massive advancement in the field of

medicine

. According to some people medicines, which are meant for human being must be

first

experimented on animals.

While

(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')

Well

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

group of people

are

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against

this

option.

This

essay will talk

expresses position, direction or location, or point in time

both the views and chooses the best option. To embark upon, though there

are

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advance technology for making and

analyzing

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analysing

medicines, it can be experimented before

implemented

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implementing

humans.

This

can be dangerous sometime and it can risk someone’s

life

. So

that is

why Scientists experiment it on animals before launching them into market for usage. Since an individual person’s

life

is very precious it harmful to

experimented

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experiment

on humans and there is a law regulation on not to experiment

medicine

on humans.

For example

, In India around 1979 one of the scientist experimented Polio

medicine

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for

12 people. Unfortunately, all of them died due to some miscalculation of the usage. It was a big failure. From

then

onward Government of India imposed a law medicines which will be used by humans after it experiment

first

on animals.

However

, many social activists and animal lovers are against these experiments. They feel, that the use of different ingredients and various

acids which

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acids, which

are very harmful and it might cause side-effects to the

life

span of animals. There are possibilities of spreading these side effects on other animals. For instants, in the state of Bihar in India,

Monkeies

any of various long-tailed primates (excluding the prosimians)

monkeys

were experimented for a particular diabetic

medicines

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medicine

. It was successful and

this

medicine

are

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prelevant

having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue

relevant

in the market.

but

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But

the side effects of

this

medicines

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medicine

on experimented Monkey

was

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were

terrible and many were

died

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dying

. To sum up, though I it is important to implement

medicine

first

on animals to save

human’s

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a human’s life

life

. But, at the same time Scientists must play a responsible role, in keeping in mind about the tested

medicine

before implementing.

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