The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been suggested that the government should control the amount of

violence

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in films and on

television

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in order to decrease the rate of violent crimes in society. It would certainly be easy to garner support for

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a move, but solely

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a policy will do little to effect social change. The question has often been raised as to what extent media

violence

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actually influences

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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. One can readily recount incidences of a child or young person viewing some violent

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in a movie or on

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and

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trying to reproduce that situation in real life. It is hard to estimate the amount of

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which can be traced back to

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shows or

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movies, but

the existence of

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incidences is undeniable. Logically, removing

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violent content should directly reduce the incidence of

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violence but

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violence, but

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relationship between violent media content and violent

behavior

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is not so simple. While much has been recorded

of

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young people imitating media

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, little has been directed to the influence of sad

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on those who are able to differentiate the imaginary situations in movies and on

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from reality. If one were to find no similar

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relationship, it

could be immediately surmised that the most direct solution is increased supervision of young people, and not the modification of media content. The degree to which people are influenced by what they see in the media depends directly on how

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responsibly, they

are educated about the relationship of fiction and reality. Watching comedies

does not transform

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do not transform

one into a comedian, and watching violent movies does not directly make one violent. Rather than taking crude half measures to repair complex social problems, more focus must be placed on the nature of interpersonal relationships, social responsibility and personal accountability.