Many people say that universities should only offer to young students with highest marks, others say they should accept people with all ages, even if they did not do well. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

The issue of whether tertiary education should accept well-qualified

students

or scholars of all

ages

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some public controversy in recent years.

Although

choosing the

students

with the highest marks is prominent, my conviction is that accepting all applicants of all

ages

is a high priority. There are several reasons why young people with good academic results should be exclusively entitled to

further

education.

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courses

such

as economy,

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science fields,

students

are equipped with good fundamental knowledge which

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assessed by passing the examinations with flying colors.

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programmer whose job is to create

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programs through lines of code,

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certainly needs to be fluent in academic theories of

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the algorithm

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, which are hastily acquired by

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students

.

Second,

young individuals or those with excellent academic backgrounds possess the skilled manpower for society to do well in any

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.

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is because they take advantage of

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productive phase of their life so as to enhance the existing knowledge for solving any troubles in any

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.

However

, universities should accept all applicants of all

ages

and those with less remarkable performances give them a chance to go off educational institutions. From a basic human rights perspective, individuals can apply to any academic course in university as long as they

fulfill

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the entrance requirements. Harvard

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,

for instance

,

approve

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the candidates if they show determination and passion in an essay.

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, society

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supplied

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human resources and

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a lot of benefits from them. In fact, it is

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wasted

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their

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talent

potentials

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if

being

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they are

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denied entry to tertiary education

initially

. In conclusion,

although

choosing the youths with

highest

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marks is important for some, accepting all

ages

is crucial for most. Depending on how to contribute

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community

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the community

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, universities should find the candidates

suitably

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.