Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that there is no need to attend cinemas at
present
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the present time
time
because everyone could watch films on their gadgets. At the same
time
other people say that only
cinema
could give complete satisfaction of watching films.
This
essay agrees with
first statement
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the first statement
in case of using not only mobile devices for watching a content but
also
a
TVs
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TV
. Some people argue that the only one way to enjoy films is watching it on the wide screen of the movie
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
. Going to the
cinema
considered as the special event, a way of going out to spend free
time
with family or friends on vacation. But there are some inconveniences.
For example
, some people in the
cinema
could speak or laugh too loud and distract others or the cost of going to the
cinema
could be significantly larger than buying a film and watching it on the
device especially in
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device, especially in
case
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cases
the case
when several people will watch the film. Watching movies via web services presented on almost all devices with various operating systems is much more beneficial. There is a big library of films which one could watch at any
time
and any
place including
Accept comma addition
place, including
big TV screens and even there is an option to pause the video and watch it later in case of something.
For example
, services like Netflix and Amazon Video offer subscriptions to all of their
content including
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content, including
vast amount
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the vast amount
a vast amount
of movies and TV series for about 10 dollars per month and it could be watched both on mobile and stationary devices. In conclusion, while some people prefer going to
cinema
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the cinema
, there is a contemporary way of watching films anywhere and at any
time
.
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