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Should government make decisions about people's lifestyle or should people make their own decisions?

#government #decisions #people #lifestyle
It is the right of every individual to decide about the
lifestyle
 he should lead. Though, the
government
 cannot pose any view on people's way of
living but
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living, but
 certainly it can help the public in leading a good life by creating equal opportunities.
Firstly
, money is considered as a major deciding factor in choosing the way of living. There is always an economic class difference which is quite visible across
country
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the country
.
This
 is due to the fact that the
government
 is
failed
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failing
 in providing equal chances for people
interms
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in terms
 of earnings.
For example
,
the richer
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the rich
 are getting
richest
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richer
rich
 by grabbing the opportunities
where as
on the other hand
whereas
 the poor
are not even provided
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are not even providing
 a chance to prove his
capablities
the quality of being capable -- physically or intellectually or legally
capabilities
. In order to establish economic equality, the
government
 should
upbring
 the
lifestyle
 of
poor
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the poor
.
This
 can be
acheived
to gain with effort
achieved
 only if the
government
 helps the poor in availing interest-free loans. It is the
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
 of the individual to devise a
plan
 to run a profitable
business which helps in
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business which helps
 improving the
lifestyle
. It is
also
 significant to
plan
 the expenses in order to live a peaceful and debt free life.It is always wise to
plan
 the future and have a
contigency
a possible event or occurrence or result
contingency
plan
incase
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in case
 of any
unexpeceted
not expected or anticipated
unexpected
 situation. To conclude,
lifestyle
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the lifestyle
 of people
is
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has been
 always one's own choice but if the chances provided by the
government
 are equal irrespective of class
then
 every individual can live a wonderful
lifestyle
.
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