Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

Thanks to the development of globalization, young generations now have opportunities to interact with foreign peers. While it is true that

this

activity brings many merits for teenagers in terms of self-improvement, I believe that it could impact to the

economy

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economic

growth of a nation.

To begin

with, there are several major benefits when adolescents study abroad.

First

of all, since learners have a chance to interact with

foreigner

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foreigners

a foreigner

, they would gain more experiences from different cultures.

Therefore

, could improve their personal skills

such

as communication and broaden their knowledge.

In addition

,

this

international exchange project could

also

be beneficial for students

on

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in

of

for

to

the future. To be more specific, well-paid jobs often require employees who have a diverse profile with a wide network of activities. Turning to the alternative side, the downside of

this

organization overshadows its advantages for two primary reasons. The main

short coming

a failing or deficiency

shortcoming

stem

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stems

from the high expenditure on

transportation which

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transportation, which

could lead to a budget deficit for a nation.

Consequently

, it could negatively effect on other essential sectors

such

as medical or household. Another reason would be the environmental problems. Since the travelling stage of

this

program

require

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requires

a great deal of transportation, corresponding

for

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to

an enormous amount of exhausted carbon dioxide.

This

could cause many kinds of pollution, especially atmospheric pollution.

As a result

,

young generation

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the younger generation

younger generation

younger generations

may have to suffer from

this

problem which would ruin their physical health and lead to various diseases. To recapitulate, it is undeniable that the international

students

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student

exchange program is extremely beneficial for teenagers in terms of

personal

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personality

-development.

However

, I strongly believe that

this

program could harm the environment as well as

human’s

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human

well-being and the governments should

also

concern about other sectors.