Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices

These days,
couple
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a couple
of people hold the view that there are too many options for people in the modern era. I agree with
this
opinion and think that the modern person is obliged to stand towards a lot of different choices in his life.
Firstly
, it happens because of
fact
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the fact
that there is plenty of versatile jobs and career options in the future. It is
well known trend
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a well known trend
, that the quantity of new professions is increasing over time, especially with the development of technologies and opening of new spheres of employment
such
as genetic engineering, online medicine and artificial intelligence. So, our generation is forced to choose
one
area among these thousands of different spheres of employment to not to become
dissapointed
disappointingly unsuccessful
disappointed
with the wrong choice in the future.
For instance
, I am suffering from the choice of specialization in university, because universities offer a lot of different interesting specialization and I
can not
can not
cannot
cope with distinguishing
one
from them.
Secondly
, there are a lot of different social flows in the modern world. Amount of different social flows and sub-cultures significantly increased in the
last
20 years and some people need to choose
one
of them in order to be able to communicate and interact with the society. These people believe that they need to apply to
one
or two particular social groups to be able to communicate with someone and avoid loneliness, and I
can not
can not
cannot
disagree with them because it is a common tendency in the new era and it really depends
of
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on
person's personality
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a person's personality
and mind.
For example
, teenagers without any friends around them, may have a
difficulties
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difficulty
with choosing a community to join in order to make some new friends. To conclude, nowadays we have too many choices in different spheres of our life,
for instance
, in choosing a job or making new friends. And in
cause
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the cause
of that, I believe that modern people really have
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
many choices ahead of them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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