A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people Outline

Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well.I am writing
this
letter to inform you about
the the
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my contribution
for
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our article.There is a
book
which
really
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influenced by
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me personal
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personal
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personally
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and
profeesionally
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professionally
professional
,
the
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named 'Rich
dad
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and
poor dad
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Poor Dad
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'.
This
book
is written by
famous
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the famous
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American writer MR. Robert.It has been the
best selling
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book
for 7 years. It is
financial
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a financial
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book
which
revealed
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the
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several aspects of financial
management
for
business
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businesses
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and
person
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people
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. I
have
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surprised
the
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way
this
book
written
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was written
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with
real life
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examples.After reading
this
book
, my prospects towards money
management
has
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have
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entirely changed. I have got to know the actual differences between rich and poor.
Apart from
this
,
i
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have become able to differentiate
betwwen
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between
do's and
donot
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do not
for money
management
.
This
book
would influence other
people
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people's
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opnions
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opinions
about
fiancial
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financial
management
. Since each section of
book
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the book
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relate
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to
rich
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the rich
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and poor
class
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classes
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.I hope
this
would
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will be
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able
provide
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financial
knowlege
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knowledge
to
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the audiance
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audiance
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audience
. I
recommand
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recommend
you to read
this
book
. Best Wishes, Parm
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grammar
Ensure that the text is free of grammatical errors and typos. For example, replace 'the the my contribution' with 'my contribution' and ' proffeesionally' with 'professionally'.
development of ideas
Try to develop ideas fully in each paragraph. For instance, you can elaborate more on how the book's insights affected your daily life and decisions.
development of ideas
Enhance the explanation on how the book can influence others. Include personal examples or general scenarios to make it more compelling.
coherence
The letter has a clear beginning, middle and end, making it easy to follow.
tone
Your enthusiasm for the book and its impact on you is evident.
task completion
The letter addresses all parts of the task: describing the book, explaining its influence, and suggesting its potential impact on others.

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