It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Being able to travel to
remote natural environment
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the remote natural environment
such
as the South Pole is an advantage. I will explain my view in
this
essay Travelling to various parts of the world has always been interesting for most people. With
increase
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the increase
an increase
and advancement in technology, travelling has become a lot
more easier
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easier
. From riding on the backs of donkeys and horses to travelling by cycles
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
cars and trains and now
finally
by aeroplanes
,
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,
travelling has become very fast. It used to take days to travel from one place to
another where as
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another, whereas
another whereas
now it takes only
few hours
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a few hours
. Due to increase in
technology we
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technology, we
are able to see many undiscovered and historic places. Olden days when travellers used to discover new places they would share their experiences in the form of stories, and we would have to imagine it.
Moreover
,
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,
these days there are cameras which help us to capture those moments or even take videos of the areas. These photographs and videos can
then
be uploaded on the internet which makes it possible for many people to view while sitting
at
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in
their homes or
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
. A feature known as GPS is now installed in the mobile phones as well as in cars which shows you the route and time estimate to reach a particular place. Some of the natural environment in remote areas
are
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is
still undiscovered. Travelling alone to unknown places is now possible with
this
feature. It helps you to reach your destination
,
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,
even if you have missed your route. Modes of travel to places with natural beauty ,south pole are now possible
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