Some people think that the increasing number of cars is the biggest problem facing cities. Other people believe that there are even more bigger problems Discuss both views and give your opinion

The growing and expansion of cities while
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
favorable
, poses certain challenges. Some activists believe that the rising number of motorized
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is the biggest challenges facing cities
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,
others believe that
unemployment
is more critical. Both camps will be
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
analyzed
before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. It’s clearly evident that the rising car numbers depletes natural resources and induces health risks.
For example
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,
ever since 1974, there was a yearly doubling of car estimates in
used of a living language; being the current stage in its development
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a city in north central India
Delhi
delhi
and to match the surge in that market rubber trees and steel mines known to be abundant in
used of a living language; being the current stage in its development
New
new
a city in north central India
Delhi
delhi
were depleted
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in addition
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moreover
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the increasing incidence of asthma
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puts
put
a toll on government funds
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Therefore
therefore
the claim that rising car number is the biggest issue facing cities is supported
On the other hand
,
unemployment
directly and through
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its
it’s
repercussions presents a headache to people in power
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This
this
is because jobless people are more inclined to
register formally as a participant or member
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enroll
in criminal activity to secure
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a living
living
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In
in
addition, the ramifications of
unemployment
might tear the fabric of society as a family with
unemployment
is more likely to have higher divorce rates
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alcoholism
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,
juvenile crimes and domestic abuse.
Therefore
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it will be impossible for
such
society to dig their way out of poverty
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prosper and build wealth.
Hence
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the notion that
unemployment
is the chief concern is supported
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In conclusion
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after
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
analyzing
these two opposing points of views, I
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believe, than
believe than
unemployment
is the main concern. It’s hoped that government officials will towards addressing it.

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