With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that nonacademic subjects at school (eg: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

In
21st century
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the 21st century
, nuclear
power
plays a very important role on earth in providing efficient, cheap and clean
energy
.
On the other hand
, nuclear weapons are the major factor in maintaining the world peace. I strongly agree that the benefits of nuclear
power
are far greater than the disadvantages, if only safely used. The discovery of nuclear
energy
in
20th century
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the 20th century
changed the way the humans lived ever after. At the same time, subsequent invention nuclear weapons
also
posed a
greatest
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greater
threat to the existence of humanity. There are
handful
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a handful
of countries that
poses
have as an attribute, knowledge, or skill
possess
posses
pushes
the nuclear weapons technology, because of which the scare of use them in conflicts has been haunting humans forever. There were some high profile accidents in nuclear
power
plants in the recent past, like in Chernobyl, Russia and Fukushima, Japan. These disasters are posing as a grave reminder
to
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of
the humanity on the destructive
power
of nuclear
energy
.
However
, since the technology is rapidly evolving, harnessing of a nuclear
energy
is turning out to be safer than ever before. Earth is running out of natural resources, humans are extracting the fossil fuels in huge amounts like never before to
power
the people’s life.
This
can’t continue forever, ultimately destruction of earth leads to destruction of humans. Nuclear
power
is one
such
technology if safely used, it can help humans to preserve the earth
to
Suggestion
for
the
next
generation by supplying clean, reliable and cheap
energy
. To conclude, I agree that advantages of nuclear
power
out number the disadvantages. Nuclear
energy
is like a double-edged sword, it can be used for both good and bad. Only by people’s collective effort, the benefits can be harnessed to the maximum extent.
Submitted by challa.vj on

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