The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.

The line graph provides data about cinema attendance in the United Kingdom during a 20
period from 1990 to 2010. It can be clearly seen, that the older
group was the highest percentage of cinema visitors. Overall, the UK cinemas experienced a fluctuated in a similar way flow of audience for all four
groups. In 1990 the highest share of moviegoers (around 37-38%) accounted for those 34-54 year olds, while the lowest ratio involved the youth at about 15% and less than 20% for those under 34. The indicators for all
group rose gradually until 1995 and
dropped progressively
the beginning of the new century. The
five years the UK cinemas witnessed a significant growth of peoples’ attendance by nearly 10% up in each
reaching peaks in 2010, where a massive 50-52% consisted of the oldest visitors and around 22% were youth generation.
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