The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.
The line graph provides data about cinema attendance in the United Kingdom during a 20 years period from 1990 to 2010.
It can be clearly seen, that the older
age
group was the highest percentage of cinema visitors. Overall
, the UK cinemas experienced a fluctuated
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a
similar way flow of audience for all four Correct article usage
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age
groups.
In 1990 the highest share of moviegoers (around 37-38%) accounted for those 34-54 year olds
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year-olds
while
the lowest ratio involved the youth at about 15% and less than 20% for those under 34. The indicators for all age
group
rose gradually until 1995 and Fix the agreement mistake
groups
then
dropped progressively by the beginning of the new century.
The
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In the
next
five years the UK cinemas witnessed a significant growth of peoples’ attendance by nearly 10% up in each age
bracket. Finally
reaching
peaks in 2010, where a massive 50-52% consisted of the oldest visitors and around 22% were youth generation.Wrong verb form
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