The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.

The line graph provides data about cinema attendance in the United Kingdom during a 20 years period from 1990 to 2010. It can be clearly seen, that the older

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group was the highest percentage of cinema visitors.

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, the UK cinemas experienced a

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similar way flow of audience for all four

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groups. In 1990 the highest share of moviegoers (around 37-38%) accounted for those 34-54

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,

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the lowest ratio involved the youth at about 15% and less than 20% for those under 34. The indicators for all

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rose gradually until 1995 and

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dropped progressively by the beginning of the new century.

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five years the UK cinemas witnessed a significant growth of peoples’ attendance by nearly 10% up in each

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bracket.

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peaks in 2010, where a massive 50-52% consisted of the oldest visitors and around 22% were youth generation.