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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating to much fast food. It is neccesary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Goverment
Suggestion
Government
shoul
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
 levy a tariff
of
Suggestion
on
 fast
food
 because in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from
health problem
Suggestion
health problems
a health problem
.
Firstly
Accept comma addition
Firstly, this
this
 essay will discuss how higher tax would raise prices for
this
food
. In a lot of countries
,
Accept space
,
especially in western countries fast
food
 is the popular
food
. They buy
this
food
 for their breakfast, their lunch and even their dinner. About the workers are too busy
in
Suggestion
with
 a day, they spend 7-8 hours to go to work in the office so they don't have time to cook their meal. The
besr
(superlative of 'good') having the most positive qualities
best
 solution
is buy
Suggestion
is to buy
buys
 fast
food
, it's
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
 and don't waste
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 much time. Many fast
food
restaurant
Suggestion
restaurants
 near their office and suitable for the money so they just only take a few minutes to have a lunch. Or maybe if they are lazy cause they don't want to cook for the dinner
thay
people in general
they
that
 can
also
 buy
this
food
.
This
 problem
lead
Suggestion
leads
 to the consequences that they'll suffer from
desease
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
diseases
,... We need to solve
this
 problem by levy a tariff on fast
food
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