Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion

Quality of education provided by schools plays vital role in shaping up a person’s life. Some people suppose educational institutions select students on the basis of their academic merits. While, another set of people thinks, it should be done by looking into various unique talents. In my opinion, I believe students have often discovers their hidden
talent
by interacting different types of people with different qualities. On the one hand, the great talents born often come with the cut throat competition among the other brightest student. It is better to offer admission to on best
academics
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academic
scores students
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scores, students
it makes them more competitive and
sportive
furnishing support or assistance
supportive
nature to work
more harder
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harder
more hard
.
one
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One
of the
example
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examples
is, Scientist do research and do various experiments, by any chance, even it got fail again they will try
to be succeed
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to succeed
.
On the other hand
, one cannot deny that unique
talent
is a hidden
talent
which is often discovered randomly. Studying with different qualities of students will get to know once hidden
talent
and by working on that hidden
talent
can be more successful in life.
Such
as
cricketer
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a cricketer
from
India Sachin
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India, Sachin
Tendulkar get to know his ability to bat by the help of
this
school
friends
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friend
. To conclude, I firmly believe, many people are not blessed with the
academics
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academic
knowledge but
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knowledge, but
getting into the school of which got various talents discovers themselves and there are set of students gives them the opportunity to
show case
a setting in which something can be displayed to best effect
showcase
their academic and competitive qualities by getting enrolled on those kind of institutions.
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