Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In
this
day and age, modern technologies and social media play a crucial role in many
people
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peoples'
peoples
life
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lives
. Many people are debating whether modern technologies help us to be more sociable or we are becoming more alienated from society. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views.
Firstly
, let's take a look at modern technologies and discuss why they help us to be more sociable.
Nowadays modern
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Nowadays, modern
technologies are popular. New market research show as every
third
people
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person
in the world have smartphones, tablets or other electronic devices with a connection to the mobile internet. We have access to many free video applications which help as talking
with
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to
friends and family members who live around the world.
Today people
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Today, people
also
enjoy
social media group
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a social media group
like Facebook. Facebook
connect
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connects
people in virtual reality and gave their chance to follow friends news and events.
This
information can help enjoy
to
being one more than one
two
same free activities and meet friends in real life. Another point worth as attention is we live in an age where modern technologies addicted people. Nowadays, people spend
time
with computers, phones and tablets and not have
time
to go outside and spend
time
with friends. Today we can apply for as visas, passports, Medicare cards online. These facilities help us save
time
, but
also
made
as
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
less sociable. When we go to the park with kids, very often we
seeing
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are seeing
see
parents who spend
time
on Facebook and not play with kids. Kids prefer to spend
time
with electronic gadgets
not want
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aren't wanting
to enjoy sports activities and integrate with other kids. From my point of view, modern technologies don't help people witch sociable.

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