The tendency of human beings to copy one other is shown in the popularity of some fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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Since the dawn of time people have been inclined towards replicating

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each other

in their habits and preferences.

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can be seen by how the masses opt to wear similar types of clothing and purchase the same kinds of goods. I agree that

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is true to some extent. Mankind is a race of unity. For

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reason people feel the need to be in sync with each other in order to fit in.

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is because they want to belong to something and have a greater sense of identity.

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, mirroring the style of others is a common way of how individuals feel united, especially if it is for a certain cause.

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, in the late 1980's when the freedom movement began in NYC, everyone was wearing jeans.

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trend became famous, and these denim trousers were seen as a symbol of participating in the common cause of; freedom. Ever since, men and women worldwide

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style, these

pants regardless of how they clash with their cultures simply because they are desired.

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do not simply mimic each other for the sake of imitation.

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by consumer goods. Some

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objects are absolute necessities

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as, food and phones.

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, men and women will make

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purchasing

them, regardless of how

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they are desired

. Even though certain brands are more sought after than others, they will still be consumed.

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can be applied to fashionable clothing items as well.

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brands have a much higher demand, there are some staple clothes that are the basis of clothing that will never stop being bought. Undeniably, not all purchases are made on the basis of mimicry. In conclusion, while humans become one when they are similar in their habits and life choices, their

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can be seen in other ways, like the way they think or their lifestyle choices.

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goods and attire may sometimes prove

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to be true, but it is not always the case.

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Topic Vocabulary:

inherently social creatures
acceptance and validation
peer influence
fashion trends
consumer behavior
media influence
celebrities
social media platforms
trend adoption
mass production
fast fashion
accessibility
unique identity
mainstream trends

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