It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do you agree or disagree with this development?

In recent decades, there have been a growing trend towards
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
to remote natural areas for a variety of purposes.
Although
this
trend might be of great concern to some environmental activists, scientists and thrill- seekers should still be encouraged to study and explore there. Scientists in different branches need to travel to
remote natural
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a remote natural environment
environment
like South Pole to study and protect it.
This
benefits not only those who do the research
themselves but
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themselves, but
also
the society as a whole as there will be solutions to many global problems
such
as climate change.
Second
, most scientists travel to remote natural areas in efforts to learn how to protect them from other humans. In fact, if no pertinent data about the interaction of humans and the
environment
is collected for research and made known to the public, even innocent people can inadvertently damage the areas. There are
also
a number of benefits
for
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of
tourists
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
to isolated natural
environment
. One of those benefits is that natural areas offer one-of-a-kind
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
experience to visitors.
For example
, those who decide to take a vacation to
South Pole
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the South Pole
will be able to immerse in the wilderness and the atmosphere that are entirely different from the world they know.
In addition
, by staying
inside
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in
a natural
environment
, tourists will be able to develop a higher appreciation for nature. In fact, a large number of tourists and students have chosen to become environmental advocates or even activists after a trip to the wilderness, which helps raise the public awareness on the issue. In conclusion,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
to remotes natural
areas
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area
benefits students, scientists and the world at large in a variety of ways. As long as there is no disruption to the original state of nature, everyone should be welcomed.

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