Most governments think that economic progress is the most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, in a rapidly growing era of modernization, monetary

advancement

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is becoming increasingly significant.

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essay discusses that financial

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alone is not sufficient and unless there is equal

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in other fields as well, the structure of society would crumble at even minor quakes. It states that though all other areas require

finances

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financing

to work and develop, it would only work

if there is parallel

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if there is a parallel

progress

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in moral values that sustain the society and in literacy. It's commonly believed by many people that economic

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should be the target of countries as economical stability would automatically translate into improvement in other fields. With enough money, not only would a nation be able to bear the expenses of commodities, trade and

administration but

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administration, but

would

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be able to invest in education, health, tourism and technology which would in turn draw more money.

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, Pakistan's lack of funds has resulted in the inability to build

Diamer Bhasha dam

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a Diamer Bhasha dam

the Diamer Bhasha dam

and

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result people

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result, people

are facing load shedding which has hindered business and

economy

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the economy

. Opponents of

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view say that other kinds of

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are

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important including maintenance of justice and eradication of corruption. They believe that economy would be tarnished in

hands

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the hands

of corrupt officials like Aurangzeb's inappropriate attitude led to the fall of the mighty Mughal Empire.

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, education is crucial as polished individuals would lead to technological, agricultural, administrative and business's

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.

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, remittances from educated nationals of a country or a hospital built by a flourishing doctor would definitely have any impact on the betterment of a nation. I am of the opinion that economic

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alone should never be the goal and true

progress

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is only possible if it is a part of well integrated network in which the society demonstrates

progress

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in all areas. In conclusion, economic

advancement

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not

alone but

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alone, but

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advancement

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in education and moral values is what is needed to complete the ideal painting of an ever-growing and thriving nation.