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Band 8.5

You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

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Dear Pat, I hope
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 letter finds you well. I'm writing to inform you that I inadvertently left my coat at your house at
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 weekend's meetup. I realized only when I reached home that my coat was missing. It's grey in colour having the Timberland logo on the right side pocket. I must have left it in your guest washroom hanger and forgot to collect it
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 I was rushing for the taxi to get home. As it was already too late, kindly check and confirm if my wallet and office phone are in my coat pockets, As far as I remember, I usually keep them in right inside pockets.
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, help to put my cellphone on charge and assist in setting up the call forwarded option to my personal number, as there might be some calls from the Level 1 support team for some clarifications. Kindly let me know your available time, can we catch up tomorrow morning for breakfast ? So that I can collect the belongings or should I come to your office ? Thank you, see you soon. Thank You, ABC

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suitable writing tone
Ensure to maintain a more formal and consistent tone throughout the letter, especially in the closing sentence to match the rest of the text.
complete response
Consider specifying how important or urgent the call forwarding is to emphasize importance and complete the response.
complete response
The letter clearly introduces the purpose of writing and provides key details about the situation, such as where the coat might be and its description.
logical structure
The letter is well-structured into paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect or request, which aids in clarity and coherence.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately done, establishing a friendly yet formal tone suitable for the context.
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