In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior? What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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study but
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study, but
also
learn other things like getting social, Linking Words
extracurrical
activities, games. Sometimes, it has been seen that students outside the regular academic curriculum
extracurricular
doesn't show
good Suggestion
don't show
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behavior
which is not specific to India but to many other countries as well. The essay will discuss the key reasons and solutions according to my opinion in greater detail
To start with, the prime cause of manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
this
issue is Linking Words
flaws
in parenting. Many children Suggestion
flawed
feels
distress as their environment at home is disturbed, resulting in showcase of bad Suggestion
feel
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behavior
in school. It has been seen that manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
prime casting
of attitude towards life comes from parents. It is primarily them who should set up life based examples for their children to grab.
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the prime casting
In addition
, it can be seen that Linking Words
company
of the students does matter a lot. Based on the kind of company a student is in, Suggestion
the company
habbits
with respect to eating, sleeping, drinking gets an established custom
habits
change
which in turn Suggestion
changed
lead
to change in tolerance, patience levels. In case of bad company, it can get adversely affected which is high in number.
In order to address the problem, it is important for parents to maintain a healthy environment at home and try to be Suggestion
leads
friend
to their children. It will not only help in improving the surroundings with more positive Suggestion
a friend
friends
energy but
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energy, but
also
will help in improving the Linking Words
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behavior
of the child. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
Also
, it will make the bond of Linking Words
parent child
more stronger
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parent, child
has
to bring strict rules which might be against the human Suggestion
have
rights but
a sense of fear should be there. Accept comma addition
rights, but
For example
, violation of any code of conduct may cause punishment, Linking Words
may be
a physical punishment. by chance
maybe
Such
things are harsh to the Linking Words
students but these
steps will make them follow the guidelines forcefully without any misconduct.
All in all, poor student Suggestion
students, but these
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behavior
is a serious manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
issues
which can be corrected by collaboration of parents and schools.
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issue
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